HEY,,THESE ARE MY LYRICS FOR THE PSYCHEDELIC SONG BELOW......ANY COMMENTS??

Careful with that axe eugene
Its blow will cause you bleeding
The blade is too sharp to deal
careful ..careful..careful....

the blade will cause their death
serve you your interest
but it has got no eyes eugene
careful...careful...careful........

this forest is now afraid of you
you can now cut to pass thrugh
but sometime they may fall on you
careful...careful...careful.......

Its hard to get the axe in forest
but the way it came it may go back
nobody owns the blade eugene
careful...careful..careful.....

Alas!!
you reddened the ground
how do you feel now
feel the pain you gave again n again
told you!! blade got no eyes eugene.......


careful......careful.....careful

Its about the misuse of ''power''.....the caution of handling a post/power.
Although the line '' careful ...'' is taken from the Floyd song....the scenario of these Lyrics is quite diff from that of song.
Its written in a metaphorical form as inspired by the highly philosophical and metaphorical lyrics of Waters

composing lyrics

an experience of creating lyrics on set of beautiful chords.....how bad it can be ??
Worst in my case .......Yesterday I had full freedom to choose any word i like to put to create a pattern of lyrics..n what i did......not even able to utter a single line out for any of 2 verses.."A SINGLE LINE"....
Well ok everybody cant do everything...i can create some beats for the song...i hope